Earth Spinners: Response to Obediah’s untitled poem
Man, that sounds painful. T’s definately something you should not experience again. Find a better hobby; a recreation which makes one sigh in contentment, instead of scream in anguish!
CN
closing her pussy upon my penis
like a finger being mashed in a door
like a finger being mashed in a door
I holler just as hard
Posted by
at
14:23:37
rather graphic I must say…I thought it was “hurt me so good baby oh!” (like beyonce)
Smiling at TAB…one would think so wouldn’t they? It is in deed graphic, very graphic and raw and to the point. Its brilliant! Poetry at its simpliest: with out excuses. One can only imagine the pleasure/pain he must have felt at that immediate contact/impact. Imagine the hollaring that must have happened for that three minutes!
Just recently checked Obediah’s blog: http://www.bestwordsmith.blogspot.com
He completed and named this poem, it is even better than before:
Hollow
closing her pussy upon my penis
a finger being mashed in a door
I holler just as hard
for mercy
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