Earth Spinners: A Response to Obediah’s Poem
There are times when one can only comment:
lovely. Great imagery!
I fear that I too saw such a barmaid;
she was like 8 scoops of my favorite icecream:
too much of a good thing, ultimately just a waste.
CN
Bar Maid
of Shanel
slim for him, for Jim
upper body skinny, in a man’s formal shirt
her hips protrude in her black skirt
lovely, fleshy, strong legs
longed for legs like these,
for someone dark, pretty
inexpensive as beer in a bar in the early morning
artificial nails on the hands of a queen,
needing nothing false or altered
priceless as she is, as she appears
like tide washing beach continually
nothing cheap about what is washed up
what the tide leaves
(c) Obediah Smith
www.bestwordsmith.blogspot.com
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