Tuesday, May 16, 2006

Poetic Works by Georgette Gray: Response to poem

I enjoyed this poem; however, I was left wondering, questioning, searching for the objective; the true subject of this piece.

I find that my concern is not regarding whether the poem was good or bad, because it is good; but rather I am afraid that I found it too loose: Too big, too sloppy, too free. One big hole, wet, deep, intoxicating however, my simple wooden mind is too small to enjoy the thrusting of its words.

Tighten it up and let me enjoy it!
CN

 

 

BITTER FEMALES

Large capacities of women have hearts surrounded by
Picket fences with barbwires on top and
Warning signs that say
“Beware of me – I sting!”
My bite will dig up dirt as if
I was digging wells.
(c) Georgette Gray
www.wittyrealism.blogspot.com

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Gapseed: Response to Christian’s comments regarding white Bahamians

Christian,
As you know, colour is subjective within the Bahamas. Our colour spectrum is vast and intricate. Only in this Bahamas, one can be considered blue-black, black, brown, khaki-coloured, yellow, red, black-conchie joe, conchie joe and even white. Ironically enough, all these decriptions hint toward where and how one has originated. It lends to one’s history, to one’s lienage.

I personally believe that it is because of this fact, because of this mix up in colour,this concern about race, that there exists no current statistics in regards to colour and race within the Bahamas: only guesstimates. There exists no national questionaire asking race; we leave that to the subject to interpret, in order to protect the innocent and the blind.

You ask how can the title ‘white Bahamian’ be a paradox? Well, I answer you with this merry-go-round response: colour is subjective within this Bahamas. What one person say is white, another may respond mix, and yet another would say as black as black can be. It is all left to personal interpretation.

Also, (smiling)regarding my comment concerning ‘the white palm of my black hand,’ I must remind you that inspite there being a white side, it still is a black hand.
CN

 

Guerrero said…

Cecil,

that’s at least part of the problem. how can “white” Bahamian be a paradox? Is it that Bahamian only implies “black”? why is it that most Bahamians imagine the ‘quintessential’ Bahamian, the folk image, as black, and the quintessential image of control, power, wealth as white? why do we consistently undermine our largeness and complexity as a people?remember that your one hand is, as you say, white on side and black on the other.

 

canewry said…
Bahamian white:truly a paradox. Its like the white palm of my black hand.

(c) www.gapseed.blogspot.com

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