Poetic Works by Georgette Gray: Response to poem
I enjoyed this poem; however, I was left wondering, questioning, searching for the objective; the true subject of this piece.
I find that my concern is not regarding whether the poem was good or bad, because it is good; but rather I am afraid that I found it too loose: Too big, too sloppy, too free. One big hole, wet, deep, intoxicating however, my simple wooden mind is too small to enjoy the thrusting of its words.
Tighten it up and let me enjoy it!
CN
BITTER FEMALES
Large capacities of women have hearts surrounded by
Picket fences with barbwires on top and
Warning signs that say
“Beware of me – I sting!”
My bite will dig up dirt as if
I was digging wells.
(c) Georgette Gray
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