Earth Spinners: Response to Obie’s untitled poem
Obie,
Personally for me, the individual words of “pussy” and “blood” make a horrible mix! I did not envision pretty or nice, all I saw were these individual words fighting with each other, causing an ugly site.
I attempted to appreciate the mere words of it, the poetry of it, the splendor of it; however, it being so abrupt, my usual appreciation of your poetical journey was stopped by a period.
CN
when she wipes her pussy with her legs apart
blood shakes my heart
blood shakes my heart
(c) Obediah Smith, May 25 2006
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