Straight to hell
i have never seen such a perfect v line,
such a perfect neckline
that plunges straight down
down to her heavenly parts,
her wonderous parts that tempt me;
tempt me to lust, to imagine, to desire
to admire all that she has,
all that she possesses
i am able to see
oh that v, that trechuous damn v
is a path leading straight to hell.
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I can’t leave you a clean comment because you gat a corrupt mind,I know u probably didn’t write this with any good intentions,But truly damn that V line….
Davon Gardiner, a contained corrupted mind kind be all that bad. But I always have good intentions. But I am glad you like the poem. Were you able to read “Learning about the environment”
Once again you’ve managed to tap into the part of yourself that almost everyone is afraid to enter into..that sick, twisted, charming, truthful, honest lobe of the brain. the other difference is…you actually say those things!
WHOAAA!
- Get me a 1st.class ticket, and a front row seat in that sweat poetic H.E.DOUBLE hockey sticks (HELL)of yours!
Good work, maybe next time, your poem will be more “angelic”!
your number 15th. Fan!!!
, My number 15th fan aye? You’ll anonymous people does kill me with jokes nah. (smiling) why you aint leave your name man, so I could acknowledge ya. But it sounds like you know me well, so i guess you is a friend… “sick, twisted, charming, truthful, honest” does sound like me though… Oh well; thanks for leaving a comment though…I hope to read more from you I guess…but “lee” your name next time dred!
hey i love your poem ….every time i read one ofyou poems i womder…..where did you get such brilliant mind.
Thanks very much sis…There are times I wonder that myself…now if these poems can just make some money for me…life would be beautifully grand.